I really like it.
The attention you added to the bodies itself was what really impressed me and I found it meaningful but not to over the top...Nice colours soft but nice.
I also liked the effort you added into the room, the pictures in background among the interesting shade.
Lastly...WHAT THE HELL PEOPLE? No offense but whats with people on newgrounds these days? I mean there was a time when people used to comment and give helpful tips if they disliked something...and now all they do is bad mouth without any sort of reason. It really pisses me off....
So don't let the idiots get to you, you did an amazing job.